burglar and rapist
eat their meals separately
to get their fair share
wife and her husband
hats tossed into the same ring
with brims not touching
hen and a big cock
scratching at the same dry dirt
and then the pecking
Roller skating is great exercise! People on wheels.
this poem has that sorta dazzling sheen of difficulty, if that makes sense - I really like it -jd
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